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支招雅思写作小作文(113) | 柱图 杂志销售额

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分享雅思考试小作文真题范文。每一篇范文都经由专业团队反复校对,最终外教审查定稿。成功就是日复一日那一点点小小努力的积累。
The graph below shows percentages of sales of five kinds of magazines sold by a company in the UK between 2001 and 2009. 

【10月8日考场小作文-柱图】:数据表现形式更直观。
此图也能够转换为【表格】的形式(如下)。
观察分析可得,各年份中,该地区五类杂志的总数均为100%,故此图也能以【饼图】的形式出现。

【首段内容的“三言两语”。就此图而言,如划线部分所示,需涵盖内容有:1.数值描述对象+ 2.地点信息+ 3.时间信息】
The bar chart illustrates the changes in the popularity of five specific categories of magazines which a company sold in the UK in three separate years: 2001, 2005 and 2009.
【主体段1: 数据分组1:杂志类型(音乐类+体育类)。两者共同特征在于,整体变化幅度不大,且首尾两个年份数据相比,几乎没有变化。】
In all three years, music magazines draw immediate attention for the particularly low popularity, as the sales stagnated at 10% despite a slight drop of 5% in 2005. [原因状语从句] Similarly, no remarkable changes were observed in the sales of sports magazines, with the proportion being within a narrow range of 20% to 25%. [独立主格结构]
词汇小结:
1. draw immediate attention for sth. (意为“引人注目”;可用于引述重要的数据特征)
2. stagnate (v.停滞)
3. be within a narrow range of (在…和…的狭小范围内)
【主体段2: 数据分组2: 销量有显著变化的其余三种杂志:【社会+经济+电影】。段落内部,再次细分为:1.社会类杂志:销量暴跌;2.经济类+电影类:销量大幅攀升】
Meanwhile, it is also notable that social magazines, the best-seller in 2001, [同位语成分] experienced a 35-percent slump in 2009, when the sales of this category bottomed out at 5%. [定语从句] By stark contrast, the year of 2009 witnessed that magazines related to economics and movies became increasingly sought-after publications, as the sales grew substantially to 35% and 30% respectively, taking the lead in this year. [最后一句:宾语从句+原因状语从句+伴随状语]
词汇小结:
1. best-seller n.畅销品
2. slump n.(销量)猛跌
3. bottom out 跌至谷底
4. by stark contrast 形成鲜明对比
5. sought-after adj.广受欢迎的
6. publication n.出版物
7. substantially adv.可观地
【结尾:笼统写;关注:程度修饰词的使用,突出[各自特征不同]】
Overall, sports magazines and music magazines were vastly different from the three remainders in terms of sales and the pattern of change.

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