5月28日雅思大作文示范写作 | 机动车造成交通堵塞

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本期作者：朱玲娇

2022年5月28日雅思大作文题目

The use of cars and motorcycles causes transportation difficulty in cities. Why do people continue to use cars and motorcycles in cities? What is the best way to solve this problem?

高分范文及解析

Introduction

Roads in many cities are becoming extremely congested, which can be ascribed to the frequent use of private cars and motorcycles. There are two predominant factors why people still show much reliance on vehicles, and this thorny issue can promisingly be resolved.

解析

很久不考的混合文题型，问原因和同意与否。话题是老话题，和交通堵塞相关，相关话题：① C8T3: Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? ② 2021.11.20: The best way to solve traffic and transportation problem is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs and countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree? ③ 2022.2.17: Some countries have spent a large amount of money in bicycles. Why has this happened? Is it the best way to solve traffic problems?

Ø congest vt. （常用作被动语态）充满,挤满;拥塞

Ø thorny adj. 棘手的

Ø resolve vt. 解决

Reasons

To commence, the freedom and flexibility that cars and motorcycles offer should be responsible for such reliance. As mass transit operates according to a set schedule and may even be unavailable in some remote areas, passengers have to either wait a long time at the station or transfer to another transit, leading to a longer travelling distance and more waiting time. By stark contrast, automobiles allow commuters to travel whenever and wherever they want based on their own timetable. Besides, cars also have an edge over public transit in terms of comfort. Compared with taking public transportation, by which travellers have to crowd into a bus or a metro, tolerating the cramped and smelly carriage, commuting by car allows people to enjoy the cosy environment offered by the equipped audio, air conditioning and seats.

解析

原因1：灵活性；原因2：舒适度

Ø mass transit n. 公共交通

Ø commuter n. 通勤者

Ø have an edge over sb. 比某人有优势

Ø comfort n.[U] 舒适度

Ø tolerate vt. 忍受

Ø cramped adj. 〔因空间不够而〕受限制的，拥挤的

Ø carriage n.[C] （火车的）车厢

Solutions

Considering the slower traffic flow, some schemes should be prioritised. Of all the measures, the best one is to provide the public with more options of transport that are accessible, comfortable, punctual and affordable. To this end, the government can better the public transit, such as opening more metro lines, optimising the schedule of buses and undergrounds, and upgrading the facilities of the stations and carriages. Additionally, more shared bicycles can be offered to motivate commuters who travel within a short distance, and to guarantee the safety of cyclists, roads should be redesigned with bicycle lanes added. Given more convenient alternatives, citizens are more likely to desert the current travelling mode, thus alleviating the tension of heavy traffic.

解析

解决方法：提供更多通勤选择：完善公共交通（长途）+提供自行车（短途）

Ø punctual adj. 准时的

Ø better vt. 完善

Ø optimise vt. 优化

Ø upgrade vt. 升级

Ø desert vt. 放弃

Conclusion

To recapitulate, since possible factors and feasible remedies have been enumerated, the issue of traffic congestion can hopefully be addressed with the aforementioned policies implemented.

解析

重申观点

Ø recapitulate v. 总结