10月29日雅思大作文示范写作 | 每个人都应该在学校待到18岁

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2022年10月29日雅思大作文题目
Everybody should stay at school until 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2022/10/29)
范文及解析
Introduction
Living in a society inundated with ferocious competition, young people in modern age are expected to be highly educated and qualified.  Accordingly, the proposal to raise the school leaving age until the age of eighteen is propounded, which sparks vigorous contentiousness . While some people have a few reservations, I find myself in staunch agreement with such a movement.
解析
这次的task2又是一道典型的旧题，虽然整体难度并不大，题目中绝对化的限定词everybody也需要关注；可以通过对比讨论“让所有年轻人18岁前全日制学习”的好处和坏处来展开全文；
Ø inundated with 充斥着；充满
Ø ferocious adj.激烈的；强烈的
Ø accordingly adv. 因此
Ø propound v.提出；提议
Ø contentiousness n.争论；争议
Ø have a few reservations v.持有保留意见
Body 1
Beyond all doubt, ploughing into the study under 18 ,young people are more likely to obtain certain qualifications, laying a solid foundation for their future career prospect. With excellent academic environment and abundant teaching resources in schools, by no means would the students fail to concentrate on the study. In this case, most high school graduates would enjoy strong probability to further their advanced studies in universities and seek for a decent job with their credentials. By this token, attending schools for a longer period of time is definitely a wise investment for the young themselves.
解析
18岁前接受教育可以帮助学生为将来就业打好基础；良好的学习环境，优质的教育资源必然可以让学生更专注于学习，毕业之后更多的人才有机会接受高等教育，找到体面的工作；这样看来，在学校学习对学生来说就是一个很明智的投资；
Ø beyond all doubt adv. 毫无疑问地；
Ø plough into v.投入；
Ø by no means adv.绝不；
Ø further v.推进；
Ø credentials n. 文凭；凭证；
Ø by this token adv.由此看来
Body 2
Additionally, a mandatory policy for students to stay in school until at least they are eighteen , in large part, boosts the social harmony . Adolescence is a special period, in which young people,with immature minds, tend to lack self-control and the ability to distinguish right from wrong. Apart from imparting knowledge for its own sake, teachers also play an indispensable role in helping students instill correct moral values and become law-abiding citizens. Without judicious preparations and code of ethics to support and restrain themselves, the young, in all likelihood, will engage in anti-social behaviors .
解析
强制学生18岁前接受教育也有助于促进社会和谐稳定；青少年处在一个特殊的成长阶段，他们心智不成熟，缺乏自控能力不能辨别对与错；如果没有充足的准备和正确的价值观，他们很有可能会走上犯罪的道路；
Ø boost v.促进
Ø judicious preparations 充分准备；
Ø in all likelihood 极有可能；
Body 3
Nonetheless, such a strategy does come with its own dark sides,which fails to take into account the actual desires and rights of students, those who are not academically proficient and enthusiastic in particular. Rather than trapping them in a compulsive education system, it is better for them to climb into society, which allows them to gain social experience beforehand and become economically independent. Meanwhile, longer-term of obligatory education is bound to aggravate the ongoing financial burden of the government for high demanding in school facilities and faculty recruitment.
解析
但是，强制性的教育体系也有着一定的不足。一方面，有部分学生可能学生成绩并不理想，没有学习的激情，与其把他们圈在学校中，还不如让他们提早踏入社会，获取社会经验实践技能，慢慢地变得经济独立；另一方面，义务教育时间延长在一定程度也会增加政府的经济负担；
Ø take into account v.考虑到
Ø proficient adj. 精通的
Ø climb into society v.进入社会
Ø is bound to 必然会；一定会
Conclusion
To recapitulate, to seek an ideal mode of education is one of the mission in our time. Encouraging all teenagers to accomplish the secondary school until 18, from my perspective, is a win-win situation for both adolescents and the whole society. 
解析
延长义务教育时间直到学生18岁，整体来看，对于学生和社会来说是双赢的！
Ø win-win situation 双赢的局面；