雅思大作文示范写作 | 学商科还是学历史

Some people think that there could be more benefits to society if more people study business than history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2022/12/17)
范文及解析
Introduction
Serving as one of the essential driving forces for a country’s development in contemporary society, education, as far as the society is concerned, is supposed to center on business instead of history. I am all for accepting such a statement with the following strong grounds.
解析
这个题目又是一个新题，难度中上；注意题目包含比较关系，存在限定条件to society,本质讨论的是business和history对于社会的好处;
Body 1
Admittedly, in no sense should we brush aside boons of history. By learning history, people can be fully informed about the evolution as well as the traditional culture of the country, with which they are more likely to develop a sense of belonging, disseminate and carry forward their own culture. Taking history as a mirror can also be of paramount importance to look into the future by shying away from making the same blunder. For example, when studying the civil war in the USA, people will be keenly aware that racial discrimination should be eradicated by giving the black equal rights and the hard-won peace, stability and tranquility would be cherished.
解析
不可否认，学习历史能够让人们了解一个国家的发展与传统文化从而人们才有可能会有民族归属感，也会去弘扬国家的文化；以史为鉴也可以避免在将来发展的过程中重蹈覆辙；
brush aside v.漠视；不顾；
boon n.优势；有用的东西；
take history as a mirror v.以史为鉴；
paramount adj.至为重要的；至高无上的；
shy away from v.回避；躲避；
blunder n.愚蠢的错误；疏忽；
Body 2
Nonetheless, business, beyond all doubt, brings more tangible benefits to boosting the economy of the society. All works of life bear close relevance to business, be it starting a self-operated business or being recruited by a company. Ploughing into business courses, people can not only be equipped with business management and financial knowledge, but also be furnished with practice-based skills in terms of marketing and sales. In this case, playing an indispensable role in running a company, professional knowledge concerning business, in all likelihood, allows people to have easy access to securing themselves a decent job, achieving full employment in the society and creating more social wealth.
解析
但是，学习商业对国家的经济发展能带来更切实的好处；各行各业都离不开商业，不管是创业还是作为一名职员都需要商业管理，市场营销等不同的知识；只有具备良好商业知识的人才能更容易地找到一份满意的工作，从而更好地为社会创造价值；
tangible adj.真实的；可感知的；
boost v.促进；推动；
bear close relevance to v.和...紧密相关
plough into v.投入；
be equipped with v.具有；配备有；
be furnished with v.具有；配备有；
Conclusion
In a nutshell, never should we advocate turning a blind eye to the significance of leaning history, while the stability of a society is founded upon its economic strength and prosperity, for which business should always be the top priority.
解析
turn a blind eye to v.漠视；忽略；
found upon v.把...建立在...上；
top priority 最优先的；当务之急；
重申观点；虽然每个人都需要学习一定的历史知识，但是社会发展依赖更多的商业人才。