1月28日雅思大作文示范写作 | 偏远地区旅游的利弊

2023年1月28日雅思大作文题目
Organised tours to remote places and communities are becoming more and more popular. Is it a positive or negative development for local people and the environment?
范文及解析
Introduction
With tourism having been developed into one of the most prosperous industries worldwide, tourists are now showing more preference for places of natural beauty. Personally, such preference, running counter to the widespread ideology, is in fact advantageous for both locals and the environment.
解析
年后的第一场考试不算难，旅游相关话题。注意利弊分析必须从「当地人」和「环境」两个方面阐述。
Ø prosperous adj. 繁荣的
Ø run counter to 背道而驰
Ø ideology n. 思想，意识
Body 1
For one thing, the popularity of these remote places may to some extent disturb local residents. This is mainly because some locals may either feel uncomfortable with outsiders intruding into every nook and cranny of their daily life, when communities are teeming with travellers everywhere, even at their front gates, or grumble when crowding with tourists into local shops for daily necessities. However, these problems can be avoided as long as local governments take locals’ needs into consideration and well design the tour routes. As a matter of fact, advocators will see this trend as a sound way to bring more immediate benefits for local inhabitants, since local industries, be they catering services, accommodation, or souvenirs, will thrive, producing more job vacancies.
解析
当地人层面：[让步] 打扰当地人的日常生活// [反驳] 通过线路规划来避免; [立论] 给当地人带来收入
Ø disturb vt. 打扰
Ø outsider n. 外人，外来人
Ø intrude vt. 侵入
Ø every nook and cranny 角角落落
Ø grumble v. 发牢骚
Ø thrive vi. 繁荣，兴旺
Ø vacancy n. 空职；（职位的）空缺
Body 2
For another, it is justifiable for some to worry about the natural environment in those places. To illustrate, some tourists lack respect for the natural environment and irresponsibly dump the refuse they produce along the way instead of throwing it into dustbins. As a result, these remote places of natural beauty are spoiled and become not as pristine as before. However, such conundrums can be resolved if governments enact and impose strict environmental laws to punish those travellers who litter everywhere. Deterred by the punishment, tourists will regulate their behaviour and act properly. Meanwhile, the tranquil scenery in the wild can not only help travellers to relieve the pressure and recharge their batteries but also raise their awareness of preserving the natural beauty.
解析
环境层面：[让步] 不负责的游客乱扔垃圾// [反驳] 政府制定规则，可以避免此类问题; [立论] 优美的自然环境反而可以唤醒游客保护环境的意识
Ø dump vt. 倾倒，丢弃
Ø refuse n. 垃圾
Ø spoil vt. 毁掉
Ø pristine adj. 原始的
Ø conundrum n. 问题
Ø enact vt. 颁布
Ø impose vt. 强制执行
Ø litter vi. 乱扔垃圾
Ø deter vt. 威慑
Ø tranquil adj. 静谧的，安宁的
Ø recharge one’s batteries 养精蓄锐
Conclusion
To recapitulate, the downsides of visits to remote areas pale into insignificance when set against the upsides.
解析
重申观点
Ø recapitulate v. 总结
Ø pale into insignificance 使显得不重要