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[2023/ 12/ 16] The table below shows the household composition in a North America country in 1970 and 2003.
【主体段分段】:
方法1:按照 类型 分段【本篇文章采用此种分段方法】
family household+other member sharing一段
non-family household一段
方法2:按照 时间 分段
【开头段】
The table compares different types of household in a country in North America for the year 1970 and 2003.
【概述段】
It is clear that for both years, married couple accounted for the highest percentage among all the categories of household, whereas the least number of people chose to share a room with non-relatives.
思路要点:
- 两年中,married couple占比都
- room sharing占比都
【Body 1】
Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that the percentage of people living with their marital partners witnessed a remarkable drop from 61% in 1970 to 41% in 2003. In both years, roughly 20% of children lived with one of their parents, with 10% of them living with their fathers, and the rest 10% were raised by their mothers. Likewise, a period of steadiness could also be found in the percentage of people who lived with other relatives, with the figure of approximately 13%.
思路要点:family household
- married couple:显著性下降,61%→41%
- 单亲家庭的孩子两年内总共都是20%,其中10%和father住,10%和mother住
- other member sharing的比例:也持平在13%左右
【Body 2】
We can also find that there emerged an upward trend in the proportion of people choosing not to live with their family members. In the year 1970, around 4% of the surveyed people either opted to live alone or share a room with others. After 33 years, the figure for people living by themselves jumped to 13%, and the figure for people who lived with non-relatives almost tripled.
思路要点:non-family household
- 上升趋势
- 1970年:single和room sharing都大约为4%
- 2003年:single剧增到13%,room sharing几乎上涨3倍