托福写作高分句子有哪些表达方式?

托福写作高分句子有哪些表达方式?新航道小编为大家总结出一些关于托福写作高分句子的表达方式，希望大家认真学习并可以灵活运用。

I 准确的句子表达

1. 句型分析

英语的句型包括以下几种，简单句、复合句、并列句、并列复合句等，在托福写作中一般会使用复合句辅以并列句和并列复合句，当然肯定要有简单句做到长短句相结合，下面小编为大家摘抄几个句子给大家认识并分析一下复合句和并列复合句。

a. Even though I usually know what I have to say， I cannot always express myself correctly in English.

这句话是一个复合句，由even though引导的让步状语从句。

b. This challenges me to practice my spoken English， with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.

这句话中是一个复合句 ：with介词结构中有一个that引导的同位语从句对result进行解释说明。

c. I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts， and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.

上句话是一个并列复杂句。and 连接了两个句子是一个并列句，because引导的是原因状语从句。

d. Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills and such writing， which is often described as “sophomoric”， receives low mark.

这句话同样是并列复杂句，由and连接两个句子成为并列句，再一个which引导的定语从句。

2. 有问题的句子的列举

考生写的句子容易出现三个问题：一是使用破碎句、二是使用接连句、三是句子连接不正确。

1). 破碎句

所谓破碎句就是句子不完整，通常是没有谓语(或者说谓语是动词的非谓语形式，如分词)或者是从句单独成句的形式。

破碎句 She singing alone. (无谓语，singing是现在分词)

正确句 She is singing alone.

破碎句 He did not come. Because he was sick. (从句单独成句)

正确句 He did not come because he was sick.

2).接连句

所谓接连据就是两个句子直接连在一起，既未使用连词也未使用正确的标点符号。

接连句：Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.

正确句一：Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However， they have greater freedom in planning their time.

正确句二：Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however they have greater freedom in planning their time.

3).句子连接不正确

所谓句子连接不正确就是两个独立的句子之间以逗号连接这是不合英语语法的，正确的做法要是以连词、分号、冒号、句号等去连接两个句子。

不正确句：Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change， there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

正确句：Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change， so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

II 高分表达

除了在句式上长短句相结合准确表达外，建议托福考生使用一些特殊的句式让句型可以变得多样化，句型多样化也是可在在雅思写作得到高分的条件，除了我们经常提到的高分句式如倒装句、强调句、状语前置、插入语等这些句式，这里还提出另外一个句式的多样变化就是主语多样化，下面将列举几个句子概括介绍前面四种句型而重点分析主语的多样化的句型。

正常句：Luck only works in extreme cases.

倒装句：Only in extreme cases does luck work.(否定词位于句首的倒装。)

正常句：The internet provides people access to the latest information.

强调句：It is the internet that provides people access to the latest information. (强调the internet)

正常句：The environment has been deteriorating severely along with the development of industry.

状语前置句：Along with the accelerating development of industry， the environment has been deteriorating severely.

正常句：However， new zoos try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space.

插入语：New zoos， however try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space. (连词however做插入语)

主语多样

1. 她突然想到了一个主意。

She suddenly had an idea.

通常情况下考生会马上对这句话进行翻译基本不会动句子结构，但是大家都不太能够被以人作为主语的英语句子所吸引，所以这个句子如果稍微修改一下让后面的宾语“主意”做主语这个句子就会发生改变。

An idea suddenly occurred to her.

2. 他开车心不在焉几乎闯祸。

He was absent-minded when driving and almost caused an accident.

这句话依然是拿人做主语稍微改一下，所以考生可以把心不在焉这个形容词的名词形式做主语。

His absence of mind during driving nearly caused an accident.

3. 美利坚合众国创立于1789年。

The United States of America was founded in 1789.

这句话没有任何错误，但是不够多样，可以用时间作主语。

The year 1789 witnessed the founding of the United States of America.

III 实用句型

在文章的最后小编为大家列举几个新托福考试中可以使用的套用句型，为那些写句子摸不着头绪的考生一些有用的帮助。

1. It pays to make great efforts to prepare for TOEFL-ibt.

努力准备新托福考试是值得的。

2. Nothing is more important than to receive education.

没有比接受教育更重要的了。

3. The reason why the white-collars suffer increasing work-related stress is that they pursue work achievement in career.

白领压力日益增加的原因是他们在事业上有所追求。

4. It is time the related department took proper measures.

(虚拟句式)相关部门早该采取适当的措施了。

最后祝愿大家可以在托福写作中取得满意的成绩。