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　　举例三步走，文章题不走

　　agree or disagree with the following statement?

　　The ability to maintain friendship with a small group of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.

　　No better feeling can be [倒装句] compared with being companied by great friends who love you, have you back and the most of all have fun [排比修辞]. As the social beings, humans never refuse friendship since it is literally one of the happiness we have. However, such feeling comes from either the old friends or the newly met ones. Which group means more to our lives? [小设一问，顺便引出主题] I prefer those we have already known for a long time.

　　First of all, the number of the friends is never equal to the sense ofelation. What we expect in the relationship between friends is mainly derived from the mutual understanding, and in this case, newly acquainted fellows are hardly likely the right answer.【用讲道理的方式对中心句的信息进行延展】If one skipped everything that are not friends’ favor in a restaurant; if one knewwhat his or her friends are in desperate need of just at a glance; if [小做一个虚拟语气] one chose the most ideal gift to his or her friends on a special day, each of these could bring the euphoria. 【例子可以是具体也可以是非具体的，这里用到了非具体例子】However, new friends are in no way able to do such things while the long period friendship can.【光有例子不行，要回归主题表明只有老朋友才能做到这些事】This kind of consideration contributes more to the happiness even just from a couple of pals.【夸完老朋友，记得再连接回主题的幸福】

　　在遇到这种题目信息很多的情况下，同学们一定要注意说理与举例搭配进行。同时举例如果没办法涵盖太多的信息，一定要注意在之后添加一两句的说理拉回题目的中心。